One day I was walking down the street I saw a key on the grass. I asked every one in the city but it wasent any ones key. So I went back home and went to bed.When I woke up I went searching again but it was but it was raining so I went and got my raincoat.I went searching for hours so I went back to the place were I found the key.There was a house next to key so I went and put the key in the lock.And it was treasure so I took the treasure home.I felt happy and I said this adventure was awesome but I smelt food in there to so I went to go and get it.
MY REFLECTION
Walt. use describe words to give our writing more meaning.
what i did well...
I found out that there was a house next to the key.
next time I will...
next time I will look for things around the place
Friday 19 February 2016
Thursday 11 February 2016
Did You Ever poem
MY Reflection
I was learning to write a Did You Ever poem
this found this tricky because ...
it took to long
next time I will be faster at it
Monday 8 February 2016
MY Welcome post 2016
Welcome to my year 4 learning blog. This year I am in room 15 and my teacher is Miss Massey . I enjoy doing xbox and school this year Im looking forward to doing lots of maths i hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback
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