Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Space

  Reflection
I have been learning to re-craft paragraphs to make them more effective
I found this easy because it was just 2 paragraphs to write so it was easy for me
I feel good about writing this because it's fun and I like writing
My next step is to write a paragraph and read through it properly to check for mistakes.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I enjoyed reading your story. I especially liked how you grouped your ideas into paragraphs.